>>57006122Glad you made a lost of the suggested changes! The story reads much easier than before and the little extra details added to the experience!
Feedback is just to shore up your grammar and, although there are less tildes, "less is more" could still be further applied. Nonetheless, as good a story as before, keep it up!
>>57006942Awesome story! It's nice to be able to get a look back at older Booker as he's developing compared to the newer writings, and goddamn does your prose consistently impress me!
>>57002909Wow you've got a lot of stories under your belt (that I've yet to check out :/) Will definitely get to it soon though!
