>>51694711Cynthia's face and Marley's anatomy and clothes are a bit off I think. You using any particular references while doing this? Can kind of cheat the anatomy by referencing a 3D model or one of those physical posable figures (clip studio paint has a model built in if you have that), and of course there's any number of references for an anime side profile and such (e.g. pic related). Tracing those references might help you get a better feel for what you're doing too, but try to do it yourself for the actual drawing.
Take this with a grain of salt since I myself am not very good. There's plenty of videos or image guides about this sort of thing that will have some better, more specific advice on this.It's good you're doing more dynamic things like this though, doing various poses and angles seems like an ideal way to improve (as well as drawing frequently).