Surprise. I finally have some content to post here.
Around last Christmas, I made a story about a Purrloin seeking treasure and getting a test of character, but it had some flaws. I got some helpful feedback and advice about how it could be improved, however, and now I've finally revamped the story.
Here is the new and (hopefully) improved version of "The Seeker's Tale".
https://pastebin.com/kNpyFATADifferences from the original include: a new scene at the start to explain the protagonist's background and motives, changes to an early scene to improve the depictions of the guard characters, a completely modified ending, and various smaller changes here and there. And I threw in a subtitle too, because the title is kind of bland. But I may drop the subtitle because I can't decide if it sounds good.
The story probably still isn't flawless, but I believe it's better than it was before. If you read it, I hope you enjoy it. And as always, I welcome feedback and advice.
