>>22331597Alright, I'll just start by what you should fix in your picture.
The torso and pelvic area of Chesnaught looks wonky the way you drew him. Are you trying to go for a more human-like body or one that's closer to his official art?
Depending on so, don't read after this.
The male body is vastily complex, but I think you need the most help here. It suffers from looking too wide on shoulder length, and the perspective makes it seem off too.
I strongly recommend looking at this
http://art-anatomy-study.deviantart.com/gallery/37646260/Male-Body-Anatomyand
http://fucktonofanatomyreferencesreborn.tumblr.com/post/86055588705/another-fantastic-fuck-ton-of-male-anatomy to see how to improve on his body.
Perspective is key, so make sure to have an idea of what angle the "camera" is focusing on chesnaught.
Sorry if you don't get what I'm trying to say either, it's hard to explain. Just ask me anything you need me to help on.
