>>56029172>>56029196Thank you for reading Linoone!!! This made my night.
All 5 chapters were written by me, and proofed and brainstormed by Dav, and lore checked by Mako. Chapter 6 includes a full contribution from Dav in the form of
his vision of his father>HUH!?!? Did she call us Capim Town niggas a bunch of pussies or something!?!?! What did she mean by this!?!?This was an implication that some capim residents still are learning to drink/eat in their new bodies, and it's something she's picked up on. It's a cheeky way of telling Dav she knows he's human.
>It feels like a drawn out intro.Understandable, I wanted to give each character a time to shine, so each boy got their own chapter, as well as a chapter together before i got into the meat and potatoes of the group.
Now that everything is settled and Act 1 is done, I'm going to move onto some more lighthearted stories to bridge a time gap, before diving into Act 2.
