>>17874143Yup, I'm still here.
I'm surprised at seeing a different take on the idea and it certainly gives a find idea of how you would draw legs.
Your efforts are appreciated, but I think the first picture had the right idea of being a view from the bust up as I think it might draw stronger focus on her mood. I wasn't quite sure if I should ask for a change of angle until I saw version 2.
My suggestions are this
1. Redo the first version but on the angles of pic related (bottom preferably, but top is fine too. The girl in both images captures the general mood I'm going for.)
2. If you think version 2's pose still works, then I suggest making it a distance shot instead but with the table on horizon.