>>54610252I already heard Gus narrate it, but I read it again to review it properly (and because it's just too good)
This is among the bests intro I've read. As i've already said, your descriptions are clear and detailed yet not overly prosed, just perfect. And I liked the pace of the story a lot!! How the story started, developed and ended was just so smooth to read. Ciel and Fern as characters are super cool. I love the cute, innocent personality of Fern and the caring personality of Ciel. They go well together! I also love how you very subtly referred to the Clover Guild in Capim Town without outwrite mentioning it! It was so cute seeing Fern excited at the prospect of meeting potential human friends :>
