>>56119589Anon who came up with the idea here, just read this, and I think you did pretty great here for the first piece you've written in a while!
The victim being a new Team Rocket recruit was a really creative idea, and I liked the brutal interrogation Erika gives him as well. Erika herself is written pretty well too, I like how she subtly flips between outwardly cold and mockingly sweet in her demeanor. The way it ends with him stuck onto her sandal with the "promise" of maybe being let go if he endures definitely has me wanting to see how it continues, which I'd say means you did a great job with making this scenario really compelling.
My only real critique with the story, is that I do wish there was a bit more description/imagery of what Erika's hands looked and felt like to the tiny person, like how you had described the sandal and socks later on. Though that's mainly just my bias towards giant hands coming again admittedly (I will say the handplay you did write was still pretty good, especially her breaking the dude's arm.) Other than that, as I said, I think this is a pretty strong return if this is your first writing piece in a while. Always happy to see more writing like this in general!
