>>31902544By "mini events" I meant just cute or fun things to make it more interesting to read. Like the sunscreen ice cream ones from your last two chapters. Rotom was also pretty fun with his dialogue. As the other anon pointed out, there were times it felt like you just avoided those on purpose, like with Sun not commenting on swimsuit, or Lillie not even bringing it up later.
There's been more of these moments in your newer chapters, so that's nice. Still, I'd rather have you take your time and continue at your own pace than forcing a few moments like that even when you don't want to. Unless you like it yourself, don't put it in your story.
