>>43300294-Too much anthropomorphization in general. You're designing pokemon, not furaffinity ocs.
-Too edgy and dark primarily the second and final evolutions. Remember, its a kids game that both boys and girls will play.
-Don't go so crazy with the double typing. Not all starters have to have a second type.
-There is not enough solid, uninterrupted color in some of these designs. Without it, they look messy, over-complicated and blend in with their surroundings.