Finally got around to reading the newest stuff from this thread.
>>54050652Dont put yourself down king, this was pretty good. The fight scenes were the highlight, you did a good job at blending your interpretation of game mechanics with more unique interactions between Pokemon, each fight was enjoyable to read.
The description of the dungeon being specifically designed to wear down and disorient travelers was very unique, i like your idea that mystery dungeons are actively hostile and malicious, almost like sentient beings.>>54055368I liked this one, pretty much all of my thoughts about it are summed up by
>>54056503I dont have much specific to add, but i enjoyed it. The Doctor is already a sweet character, and i think Sterling and his group will be fun to follow going forward. But yeah, i fully agree with the other guy's concerns if you plan to make this a major sort of "story arc" that encompasses the whole group.
>>54056413This one is also good, based stumpy. I thought the flashback is cool, Stumpy is definitely very tenacious and strong-willed, even in the face of a terrifying and seemingly impossible situation. I think he can achieve anything he wants if he puts his mind to it desu
