>>37603953>Thousands of years ago a meteor crashed into a small island off the coast of Western Unova(California)The region name is a work-in-progress, I hope.
>It contained hundreds of zygarde cells which were spread out across the islandWe'll come back to that.
>In the present day, the unovan government send out groups of men to many of their different territories to find and capture legendary PokémonI think you're either giving the Feds too much credit or you're giving Legendaries too little credit. The only people who have caught legendaries are actual 200 IQ prodigies or some of the strongest trainers in the world (PCs, Champions, Frontier Brains, etcetera)
>A group of 8 men were sent to the small island and find a 10% zygarde which runs away from themIf there were hundreds of cells on that island, why is there only a single 10%-er? If the Feds can chase other legendaries, how does this one get away?
>During this, a Mafia group starts to expand from their city and cause mischief around where you liveI dig it.
>The Mafia eventually finds and captures zygarde which leads to you and the government group teaming up(Around the 5th/6th gym)How do the mobsters manage to do what the legendary-tracking feds cannot? Seems Zygarde would only be captured by them if it wants to be caught--could make for an interesting twist, possibly.
>Zygarde eventually escapes to a massive mountain in the center of the region where most of the zygarde cells are atWhy did hundreds of cells move off the island and migrate to the center of the region? This makes the island seem extraneous if it's only home to ten cells and a core in the present day.
>It becomes complete form zygarde, and you have to defeat it and the government group before facing the final gym and eventually the elite fourThought we were working with the Feds?
I understand that a lot of details were left out so I don't have all the info with me, so I'll give your summary a 6/10 passing grade.
