Alright guys, I'm back with an update to the hypnosis fic I'm working on and it's going to be a mammoth of a piece so far, unless the intro here ends up taking longer than most sections.
That being said, I'm normally a comedy writer, so not everything is taken entirely seriously, at least with the descriptions. Does anyone like what I have so far? I apologize for teasing this out so much but it's very late where I live and I need to get up early.
http://pastebin.com/TmQY6qRs 