>>18765735Fuck yeah. Gorgeousssss~~
I think what anon may be referring to is how the lines on the face fit with the "perspective", i.e. its roundness/how it occupies 3D space. Your art is fantastic, and the only criticism I can give is that making things appear round or work with the perspective doesn't quite work all of the time. You are getting better with each and every sugi though.
For example, if the end of the nose were to look more flat, the mouthline would have to recede more back/to the upper left, not continue to the left. I tried to give an example, but I don't know if it's any good or not.