>>22978543OK BACK HOME!
going to start writing right now
>>22979380It's an idea, i'll use some themes will but the idea won't really work with this story, it's more the loving trying to fix someones trust side, rather than actiony
>>22979860Brutally honest Anon, you need to fix a few things, IMHO, the body size, and the legs are the worst offender.
Gard's body is tiny TINY small, and i can't even figure out what's going on with those legs
