>>53437710Thanks for your critique, Ribombee-anon. I'm glad you still enjoyed it despite the issues. (Could you give samples on the proofreading part if possible?)
>Booker can’t flyAh I must of skipped that detail! I'll do a quick rewrite when rentry goes back up.
>One more thing... I think it’s really cool how you took a funny little joke from a previous thread and spun it into an entire story. Yeah, I always wanted to do that, at least once, but writing everything, attempting to proof read in 13 hours straight might be a bad idea... Haha...
