>>32533162Character depth? Communication? Emotion? Not just wildly giving into carnal desires because "reasons"? Shit man, just adding some loving communication between couples between intimacy would do miles of good more most fanfics out there. It gets really old, seeing loads of sex scenes where partners who are supposedly has their first go at the sideways tango just let there "instinct" take over and magically both finish at the same time and bathe in afterglow. Neither romance, nor smut works that way.