>>31269494>you seem to be at risk of humanizing gallason and gardedad as needed to accommodate the plot.I can see where you are getting at, and I do feel that I may be overdoing that. But I can see where I would need a slap to send me back in the right direction to make it seem more fitting.
Also don't worry about me going down the "fursuit" path. I would only have a few pokémon kinds that could at least be considered to be near-human in terms in intelect.
As for the mankey fight scene. I think may may of been a by-product of 2AM
take this as my cop-out. But I might re-write this here sooner or later.
