>>31702378I tweaked it in MS Paint, don't judge. :P
If I could give you one piece of advice - stop making pathways so narrow. You need them to be wide and open so that the player can see where to go. Also, it makes the area look less cluttered.
Look at my modified route. I opened up the path down to the house, put more space outside the house. I also widened the Cut tree area to make it feel less claustrophobic. On the right on the North exit, I took away a couple of trees to create a spacious feeling too.
Thoughts? (I like your map BTW, but I think these small things make a huge difference.