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yeah, this'll probably take first place kek
not much to say, it's pretty good. writing, presentation, etc. are all fine
the one thing i will say, especially if this does turn into a larger project as they've seemed to indicate, is that right now the battle system actually has the exact same problem as PMD - it is way too repetitive with just controlling two pokemon (also i kind of doubt a ledian will really fix that issue). every fight especially in the later parts just boiled down to 'spam the strongest attacks and heal when necessary' or worse, if the enemy resisted either one of my mons, then the fight would just take twice as long
not the worst problem ever, but if it becomes longer i'd really hope to see hopefully a bit more variety and maybe the ability to recruit more mons outside of the story