>>53733761Wow, now that is a genuine surprise out of me. What made you try out working on it?
It seems only one teasing antic has been added, but it strings and stretches nicely throughout the story. The hairbrushing scene is cute, and flows pretty well to the more intimate bits. You also did a nice job of differentiating her lower end too from a human, which makes the spoiled part all the more better. I thought it pretty fun when it was her turn to let out a loud noise.
The climax was relatively quick admittedly, but it made for a fun read all things considered.
Maybe someday the original author will revive himself, but this does a decent job at continuing where he left off. Thank you for doing that for me!
