>>56727314>... I meant that he ISN'T really kinky guh.
Glorious miscommunication, haha. Personally, I think he's *a bit* kinky, just in a "figuring things out because he's just a shota" way. Just my personal obsession with submissive boys speaking.
I've read that fic and yeah, that Kiki feels very out of character by definition. As for the poor writing paired with concepts you like, I understand the frustration. That's why I've been learning how to write better, or I'd be the first to be frustrated, haha. Though my ESL, going-through-the-training-wheels ass can't really give writing advice beyond what I've already given a couple threads ago, so...>Like a onesie/kigurumi?Hmm, I don't really like those, visually. I was thinking more like a striped sweater/turtle neck and a nice pair of pants.
