I know we've seen in before, but this is 101 on how NOT to write a story, nothing of value is said and it's an overly drawn out introduction where nothing is established, there isn't even music up until halfway through, I'm not an expert writer but this is just bad, I'm pretty sure even fundamental language classes on community colleges would reject this if it was shown off as a written paper.
>>55939196Kek, I wonder if the MC is meant to represent Ayrei?
