>>56907335I just read the entire thing, and well, I'll probably need to read it again in order to grasp every nuance of the second half. Great stuff, this is the kind of stuff that I was waiting for, even if it's a bit tropey
except for that "one" part. A few questions, because I don't want to have undeserved excitement.
Was the "Not these things again" a callback to the Botphan Incident of CHD, or did you just have it planned out already?Did you have Franco do "that" with Phos as fanservice specifically for me, or was that just something that popped into your head? FYI, I actually didn't gain any sudden "emotions" from that scene.Do the Paradoxes ever reach Lumiose City? Cause I got another "bad idea" from that... namely, law enforcement not being the only ones on the scene... don't worry I'll denote it as a "Fan Gaiden" again, if you'll let me do it.Much to both of our chagrin I have made tiny edits to SP and CHD again, I would appreciate it if you update them whenever you can and also change the title of SP to "Alex - The Follow-Up" so it's right next to CHD.
Control Human Delete:
https://pomf2.lain.la/f/t6huofas.pdfFollow-Up:
https://pomf2.lain.la/f/jdj8k6vh.pdf>You really have to stop giving me such bad ideas. 