>>53749126I'm glad that I did good. To be honest, I might just cut
the conflict between Smith and Kiyo entirely, i ended up just kinda adding it on the fly in the middle of the story as I was writing it, and I'm not sure how natural it is, especially since it de-escalates so quickly. But then, I dont mind the idea of
them butting heads with each other but i'm not 100% sure on how to make it work.
Other than that I had a whole lot of fun writing their interactions, they ended up playing off of each other pretty well for a first try. Unfortunately I won't get a chance to make any edits until probably Sunday so it'll be a little while, and I gotta think of how to conclude the overall story after this scene as well. Thanks a ton for the feedback bro