>>32546896fuck me i didn't realize i was writing a blog but here i go again.
I remember first time reading through ears, i got to the end where you had the whole 'aw gee she's dead dude' part, and you got me emotional for a while. And the ending made me smiling like a school girl. When i was done, i got that tingly feeling, like: "fuck i gotta write my own thing now!"
That's what your good at, you can tug at the heartstrings like a fucking guitar. You know how to make a good setting, a good setup for the characters as well, and you know how to make an emotional finale. I mean fuck, I took some notes from your story in making mine. Not much but enough to probably see a similarity or two. I don't know what or where, but i know i did.
Best i could tldr this is, that 70k word count for ears could just be 50k or even 40k. Alot of it is way too many adjectives and descriptions. I've only read ears fully, and 4 chapters of MoM. At the time you only had 4, so i don't know what to expect from it. At the time i just didnt have the motivation to keep myself updated on the story. I'm a shitposter at heart, i don't know how to describe this shit. I can barely summarize my stories without needing a paragraph's worth of text. But its the best i can do. Hell, your the kinda guy i could see having a coffee or a beer with, maybe even some of the story ideas i keep to myself. Its just your stories have fucking ADHD