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Revision bug is circulating ITT.
Rewrote a majority of HS to coincide with critique and suggestions. Shout-out to Tex and Time for their solid advice as well as any readers lurking who PMed their thoughts. The changes are too numerous to list, but the goal is an overall more pleasurable read. Now is a better time than ever to check out the story. Chapter 13 is underway and will be posted Soon™
Blatant blog bump, over and out.