>>19679950Okay! Here it is.
I think the main thing is that because her body is so flat it looks really boyish, which would work if she was big boned (but then her legs/arms would be too thin still, and her hips would be a bit different)
Her face looks really small in comparison to the rest of her head and the cleavage is awkward because her boobs aren't being pressed together and are barely touching anyways.
I like how you did her hair though, that looks good. And her thighs too, they just don't quite match with her body