>>39442568Well, since you asked. Hope this helps.
>>39442429The landing happens in so few frames that it barely makes any visual impression. The stretched and squashed frames are not centered with the other frames. There's a squashed frame before the landing: the object hasn't run into anything yet so it shouldn't just start changing shape for no reason.
The blurry borders look awful: even though the outer body of solosis is transparent, it still has a very defined border. The inner body doesn't have the proper shape, like a cell in division. The color of the inner and outer bodies is off. The color of the mouth, eyes, and squiggle are inside the semi-transparent body and should be affected by it's color. The eyes are too small, the wrong shape, and too high up on the body. The squiggle's shape is poorly defined because there's no outlines on anything.
There's no highlight on the surface of the body that changes position as it rises and falls. Likewise, there's no shadow on the inner body, in the mouth, and on the squiggle.
