>>57517601I imagine Aggie sounding like (Dragon) Mercury from Dragalia Lost, Kikuko Inoue.
>>57517637>The LL Aggron girl is a great ref to follow on, I think Aggie being around there at the end would be downright brutal for Anon in an the right ways.Haha, seems a lot of people still recognize Eddy. And yeah, that's why I had anon saying his goodbyes, as 
>>57510321 foretells his fate.
>That's a really difficult balance to hit. In some of my stories I've struggled much the same. You want to pace things but at the same time you want the reader to not grow bored going from one scene to the next. I think this was short enough where you needn't worry about it, but I get it.Yeah, I wasn't going for something too long as I have done that before in another story I've done where I put in a scene to make it longer and throw in some excitement, but some commenters were right that it came out of nowhere really.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/48433849>I'm the Arceus writer so I'm sure you've already read my stuff and know some faves of mine. But additional faves include Zekrom, Rhydon, and Mismagius, among others. It's just so nice to see more fat Pokemon stories from others. Finding them anymore feels like a trial, so I like encouraging it where I see it.Hey, Mismagius is one of my favorites as well lol. (I also used a Rhydon gal when I played Yellow in 2023) I love Maggie's portraits in Conquest as well.
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