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Pokemaniac G. !!5lyd4F1oWNq Wed 17 Sep 2014 19:44:36 No.21006332 View View Report

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I'm almost to 3,000 words now, but I have a problem.

The person who requested this story wants me to jump right into forbidden love (as you can tell from the huge jump from 'exploring the city' to 'hotel bedroom') but I'm not sure how to make it flow without it seeming too rushed.

How can I make the story drift into that without making it look poor? Rui is looking to just instantly crush on May with only knowing her for a few hours and that seems like I'm just rushing it.

I'm trying to avoid my old method of:
>hi
>hi
>LET'S FUCK
>lol k

So any input would be appreciated.

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