>>43548293This can look a lot better.
Kubfu and Calyrex didn't need their own sections, that could have been conflated under Legendary Pokemon, look at how Platinum and HGSS does it. You didn't need that and a New Legendaries section, that's just a lot of bloat, the other sections kept it clean, SwSh is bleeding into B2W2's section for God's sake.
Shouldn't the Raid section be bigger? That's one of the main appeals of the game and the first thing my eye travels on this list is Charizard's fat belly.
Apricorn balls can be removed you might as well put make Poffins under Platinum
I can't make out what's going on under Fight Strong Trainers, is that a Wifi Battle? You should make it more clear who these strong trainers are. And you already had Hop on that list already.
And the $30 bucks price tag is really asking for it, just put SwSh's original $60 price tag there and hope anons are dumb enough to think this all part of the base package and you're getting more out of it which justifies the extra $20 dollars. Or rather own up to the 60+30 and state this is all worth 90 dollars, don't be a jew.