>>31285347Still offering fics if anyone's interested.
Current idea is Guzma/Molayne, which I'm not too keen on, but I'll do it if no one else suggests something else.
>>31286722I'm not a great writer by any means but I have some experience editing and getting my stuff edited.
I went through and did some editing, although full disclosure
I stopped at the sex because of how you described Moon because it skeeved me out It's mostly just grammar stuff, but if you follow it your writing becomes a lot more readable. Besides that and some funny phrasing I'd say it's pretty good.
http://pastebin.com/1AVPAhpa 