>>25325608I haven't really heard any of the other drafts or anything, but I really like this! It seems like there isn't as much flute emphasis as the original track has (it's still there, but doesn't kick in until halfway and all), which is an interesting deviation, and the usage of the clock-like bits and bobs here and there really help to make it feel, well, time-themed. Making the strings work on a more staccato beat helps make it a lot more energetic, too. Good job!
