>>44284796Lemme give some critique
>Rhyperior feels stretched, folded, boneless and unrock-like.>The line weight is out of wack, did you use a line tool? Stop that, use line strokes>Giovanni looks off-center from his body and his head looks pinched and dragged down at the chin.The Rhyperior and Giovanni issue can be solved by doing more figure studies to find the simple shapes and proportions. Rhyperior shaped like a stout man anyhow.
His face is stylized but the construction is odd, try doing portrait studies to nail the proportions to get the style to flow better.
The line tool gives too much detail, instead use T lines and long strokes where a point meets a corner and along the outer edge of the rock pads. They don't even have to meet sometimes our brain will fill in some details.
