>>27793698I'm glad you liked it!
I did notice several times while writing that I was switching between past/present, but I probably overlooked some of these switches while proofreading it. Maybe it's because I'm used to writing in present.
Oh, that's actually not their first time. There's a line stating that "They already did this several times before". Probably I failed to make clear what I was refering to. But yeah, I think I rushed it a bit. I should have talked about her... gears but I didn't know how to deal with that subject so I left that untouched.
And again, I'm glad it made you feel that way
