>>41566738Writeranon working on that Red fic I posted yesterday here
No need to be nervous anon!
Use whatever you're comfortable with and write this fic for yourself first and foremost. If you prefer to use Gloria go for it. If you wanna make an OC real quick, go for it.
The whole "y/n" thing is really distracting imo, it pulls you out of the story because no one actually reads it as whatever their name is they read it as "your name".
2nd person CAN work but you gotta make sure you don't use too many "you"s and that not every sentence starts with it. 2nd person can be tricky to pull off in a smooth manner.
Just my two cents, though! Good luck anon and please do share when you're done!
Who are you writing about?
