>>19271394Looks pretty good, aside from basic anatomy problems
which is things most people have trouble with and you're still at the basic level so it should be fine if you're practicing and looking at references.A useful critique I could give you is to not press so hard with pencil, because it's harder to edit your work and harder to erase if you choose to go over it with pen.
Thanks for doing my request though, I can't wait to see the other one.