>>12321322if you start with the head try basing out the figures pose using the bones underneath. if your character is gonna have one arm raised and the other down its a shift in weight. i draw derpy as hell so they way i do it is everything is connected but nothing overlaps. using the collar bone as a tracking point for the shoulders n whatnot. In your case the left shoulder is supposed to be slanted which you did but since its such a flat line it gives the impression that person has no shoulder bone ya dig?