>>21147235The line to the right of the mouth was just an attempt to get the mouth area to look like the art (with the round upper lip things below the nose). Reduced that here.
>>21147347How about these? Top version has the head moved up, to see if that helps. I had it too low before. Bottom version is the same thing, with the body made more compact by moving it behind the head a bit. Does either version look better?
