>>54779748I would say that the main issues here are perspective and anatomy. The arms look too small. Find a reference pic online (or alternatively, have a reference building app) and use that to help you draw. Obviously don’t trace the reference, but use it as a base for what you’re gonna draw. It doesn’t seem like you’ve drawn for that long, but you gotta remember that your art is gonna be shit until it’s not shit. You just gotta make sure that next art is better than this one. On /ic/, you should be able to find a way to access a book called “Figure Drawing: Design and Invention” by Michael Hampton. Reading that book helped me out a chunk. Good luck drawfren.
Pic related is a piece of mine from a few months ago. It’s not where I want to be, but it’s a lot better than I was.