Behold! I finally finished writing my submission for "Enter the Federation".
I still wonder if it could be improved more, but I've spent way too long on this, and even scrapped and rewrote the majority of it partway through, so I'm ready to get it over with and publish it already. I may still make some tweaks based on any feedback I get, but it's basically done now.
I hope you enjoy this one. I now present my biggest story yet...
>Thunder Dome>https://rentry.org/RibombeeThunder>In which... can you feel the storm? It's coming.>Featuring Booker, Sneasel, Charm, and Natu>About 15300 words>>53784955>>53785452>>53785134Very nice!
RIP me, I guess, lol
>>53785733Hope you enjoy your playthrough!
>>53786263Cool! I'll read this over the weekend.
>>53786360I like it. Good job with that pixel art.
>>53786361Looks great!