>>27196718I definitely would like to see some hints in the flashback that lead to Lyra eventually becoming a dom, kinda like what the other guys was doing (teasing, picking on, shit like her taking the cyndaquil from Ethan) but it should still have a layer of innocence so the corruption is more potent. They are still kids after all (at this point at-least).
>do we follow ethan or lyra?Keep the focus on Ethan but a flash to Lyra's perspective every now and then wouldn't hurt.
>how to follow up from the flashback?There should be some build up between the flashback and the initial torture. Have Ethan do things, train, go to the Poke Mart, maybe commenting about not seeing Lyra in a while. Then later he encounters either Lyra or a trap she set up for him. He could be conscious or unconscious on the transit to the Rocket Base. The reveal of her being a rocket grunt should be a surprise to him and the reader so perspective flashing shouldn't appear until after her big evil reveal.
Maybe do a thing where Ethan ask how she got that way and she flashes-back to how she became so evil.
>how far do we take the domming?I think the best route is a strong middle ground between gentle and hardcore. I personally hate ballbusting, but a good whip and a slap is fine and a heel to the head never hurt anybody. Even though I have some personal fetishes I would like to include, I would advise going against putting any extreme fetishes (scat, piss) in for fear of alienating the audience. Unless something comes naturally, stick to BDSM.
>do we end with ethan giving in or resistingI would prefer him to resist as long as he can, but if he does get corrupted by Lyra it should be a very submissive form of corruption like enslavement/pledging loyalty to Lyra.
