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It's less adult and more 'please accept me Game Freak, please'. For starters, learn some structure. Sentence-wise and plot-wise. How exactly would Genome be able to handle fucking legends of all things unless dozens of Pokemon were cultivated for that purpose alone? Secondly, fucking Templars? This isn't Assassin's Creed, what the fuck would Templars want to do with killing Pokemon outright? What are they even there for but to be the obviously more evil of the two teams? This just seems like a mishmash of ideas thrown together in such a fanfictiony sense, that you'd do well to revamp fucking everything, kid. Thirdly, time travel is not 'epic', it is a very dicey plot element that can make or break a fucking story entirely depending on how it is handled. So if you want time travel to be in the game, go look up 'the butterfly effect'.
