>>24898941There's no canon evidence that they cannot understand English fluently from what I recall.
I don't think I have any typos, but I'm certain there's plenty of areas where my sentences might get a tad jumbled up. That's more my fault for just being too lazy to re-read most of the stuff I type.
I'll either start the third chapter tonight or tomorrow. I haven't really been in a productive mood despite the positive feedback I've been getting. Not to say I don't appreciate your criticism, it's actually a lot more helpful than to just have someone say "Good story, keep it up". Always nice to know what you can improve upon to make your content more enjoyable.
