>>56714790Now you've got me wondering what sfx plays when Bibi blinks. Every beat of the story overflows with Bibienergy. Benergy.
>Like a Dustox to a flame.Yes. More of this. No matter how much Emily may hate puns.
Love the way you treated the reader's experience here with the layout of the PDFs. Anons consider the following. Not only does the story content hold a readers attention, but also how nice it is to look at on the page.
Also, add page numbers directly to the footer. This helps with mankey-brain instant gratification to simulate progress to the reader that they are moving ever closer to their goal: reading your story to its completion for the content AND so they can give you feedback. Add a table of contents if it makes sense for a longer work to include milestones if not chapters.
>>56719033>your art is just as fun to look at as your writing is to readYou're too good at kind feedback.
>>56720065This is an interesting depth thing. How did you make this? I too want to see a quick bio for Athena.
>>56729634So comfy. Love the Jynx hairbun.
Is that a Pumpkaboo Spice Latte?
