I completed the
nightmare dungeon in Sky/Orion, and finally understand the context of this meme.
This subplot is interesting, but I do feel like the characters are way too trusting of """Cresselia""" (who totally is Cresselia and not actually the villain impersonating her, no siree). She's all like, "to save the world, YOU MUST DIE", and they seriously consider it without making any effort to get more info and figure out if she's actually right. Seems too fatalistic.>>53967089aaaa it's so freaking cute
I watched you draw it on the board, so I already said that I like it, but I've got to say it again. The way you drew him is just perfectly adorable.
>>53967126How dare you
>>53967982Very true
>>53968547A sleepover at Team Cozy's dorm sounds really cute, but how many Pokemon can fit in a single dorm?
>>53969430Pretty good. It's cool to see Chespin working to overcome his fear, and also cool to see various guildmons appear and play roles throughout the story. And overall, I really like the Chespin vs. Chillers subplot you've had throughout your stories.
One critique is that I felt like the ice cream scene, while comfy, seemed slightly disconnected from the main story. I think it might have flowed better if you did something with the fact that there's a Grass-type running an ice cream parlor. For example, Chespin could ask Tangela how he's able to tolerate working with ice all day long, and that could then expand on the main conflict and give Chespin something to think about.
Also, there's a continuity error with Waterfall Cave. In my Echo Chamber story, I said the dungeon shifted and its gem room was replaced with the eponymous Echo Chamber. But I don't blame you for forgetting that, since it hasn't been brought up in any stories aside from one by Phanpy-anon.
Anyway, I did like this part, and I'm definitely looking forward to part 2.
