>>12409364Sorry you don't like it. How is the lineart choppy? I tried to make sure all the curves were all smooth, but maybe they're not quite even? And I'm not sure how Doppole is too big, aside from being posted at 2x size, but that was just so people could see the details. It looks pretty tiny once it's on the size chart.
Evening out the teeth and lowering the one foot is... hm. I can't deny it looks tidier, but now the pose seems terribly bland.