>>21451906>>21451772>>21450664In general: I don't know how well these follow the "rules" we went over in terms of how sugi does transparency, when we went over coltergeist. I honestly don't remember that conversation much, but i'll look back over it.
Phlask:
Overall the feet seem more rounded. The left and right feet doesn't seem straight, it looks like it curves down/inward a bit. The right foot seems to be spaced closer to the left, and the back one seems to stick out less. I think this is happening because you fixed the bottom of the vial being less sperhcial, and extended the right a bit/modified/fixed the placement and angle on the eye, so now the feet don't seem to be spaced right (though they were still iffy before) The feet are supposed to be uniformly spaced around the spherical portion of the flask..
Noxial:
The shape of the glass head/face seems less spherical and more elongated, to the point where it makes the vent actually seem shorter. The eyes also seem bigger, though this could just be the perspective/angle.
Something that was an issue on the prior art you made was that compared to the original art, the transition/base of the conical vent seems a lot less well defined. It was never as defined as fumi's was, but there was still some kind of defined valley on the left side in the original art
In general, I feel like the new pose/angle does a worse job of showing off the proportions of noxial, it's angled as if the camera/view was pointing downwards, and this makes his head/the upper part of his design bigger. His gas "torso" also seems to have a more defined shape here, like he has flared shoulders, which, while I think looks very cool,shouldn't be the case.
Fumi:
- Fumighast should be slightly more yellow
- The eyes on the sugi might be a little too big
- The shape of the lower jaw is off
- For the head/upper jaw, the "head" portion is significantly less orb like/spherical on the new sugi
