>>21719354Late response but I just finished reading it. While there was a few grammar errors here and there, it wasn't distracting enough to take away from the story. Another thing I noticed was that it was a little odd that you kept flitting between Red and Ninetales's thoughts, but again, it wasn't all that distracting. I personally think that using a first person perspective with Ninetales all the way would've added more ambiguity before the smut.
That being said, it was still a good read and I enjoyed it. It's a nice breath of fresh air to see a non-rape/murder/rapemurder story posted in here. Keep up the good work Massageanon!